Post by seishounohana on Apr 25, 2009 11:05:59 GMT -5
Taken from namine117.deviantart.com/art/mary-sue-test-updated-89638664. O: Post your results here!
this test was made for people who write fanfictions featuring their OC`s [original characters] wishing to avoid creating mary-sues. You can test as many characters as you want :] remember: no offense
basics
1. Does your character has a long, rare or unusual name? [if she lives in japan, japanese name is not unusual] +1
2. Does your character has more than one first/second name for no reason? +1
3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1
Half a human? +1
[half]An Angel? +1
[half]A Vampire? +1
[half]A Werewolf? +1
4. She belongs to a royal family? +1
5. Does she have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1
___ out of 10
looks
1. She has very long hair or hair with unusual colour? +1
Is she blonde? +1
2. She has wings? +1
3. She has no overweight tough she doesn`t look after what she eats/ doesn`t exercise +1
4. Her bra size is B< ? +1
5. Does she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1
6. Her eyes have a weird colour +1
is it red? +1
7. Do you describe her looks in the first chapter? +1
Do you use words "gorgeous" "mysterious" "stunning" "beutiful" "perfect" when describing her? +1
__ out of 10
past
1. She had a terrible past +1
and she angsts about it +1
2. is she an orphan? +1
3. was she physicaly abused? +1
mentaly abused? +1
raped? +1
all the other characters know that +1
5. she saw a death of her family member +1
it was har fault +1
she only thinks it was her fault +1
__ out of 10
character
1. She has a very dark or very cheery character +1
2. She has no enemies +1
3. She has no friends +1
4. She has a "big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my BF left me, there are so many other boys in the world"] +1
5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1
6. Everyone who dislikes her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
Killed by her +1
Killed by her boyfriend +1
7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1
8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1
__ out of 10
romance
1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1
2. her boyfriend is a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1
3. she`s bisexual +1
4. she had sex with a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character you would like to have sex with +1
__ out of 10
other
1.she`s a musician +1
a rockstar +1
a dancer +1
a hacker +1
2.she`s better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1
3.she`s not from a country the story is taking place +1
she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1
4.she doesn`t have to pay for her actions/crimes/misitakes +1
5.her enemies are complete opposites of her +1
6. she looks like one of the cannon characters/character from other anime +1
__ out of 10
to the anti-sue traits!
2. remove one point if your character is a smoker
3. she has a desiese that doesn`t heal during the story -1
4. she has overweight -1
5. she`s in love with a character who doesn`t love her back -1
6. she`s weak mentaly or physicaly -1
results~
less than 5 points- the anti-sue
your character is definetly an opposite of mary sue! It`s obvious that you`ve been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn`t hurt.
5-15 points original character
congratulations! You`ve created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!
15-25 points boarding-sue
hmm... i can`t say your character is a mary-sue, but it`s really close to it! You should edit her a little to make her more realistic and interesting!
25-35 points the mary-sue
my oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you`ve overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don`t want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.
35< points the ultra-sue
OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You`ve created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character.
this test was made for people who write fanfictions featuring their OC`s [original characters] wishing to avoid creating mary-sues. You can test as many characters as you want :] remember: no offense
basics
1. Does your character has a long, rare or unusual name? [if she lives in japan, japanese name is not unusual] +1
2. Does your character has more than one first/second name for no reason? +1
3. [count all that apply]
She`s not a human? +1
Half a human? +1
[half]An Angel? +1
[half]A Vampire? +1
[half]A Werewolf? +1
4. She belongs to a royal family? +1
5. Does she have amnesia? +1
It heals as the story goes on? +1
___ out of 10
looks
1. She has very long hair or hair with unusual colour? +1
Is she blonde? +1
2. She has wings? +1
3. She has no overweight tough she doesn`t look after what she eats/ doesn`t exercise +1
4. Her bra size is B< ? +1
5. Does she belong to some kind of label? [ex. Punk, Goth, Lolita, Emo, Prep, etc.] +1
6. Her eyes have a weird colour +1
is it red? +1
7. Do you describe her looks in the first chapter? +1
Do you use words "gorgeous" "mysterious" "stunning" "beutiful" "perfect" when describing her? +1
__ out of 10
past
1. She had a terrible past +1
and she angsts about it +1
2. is she an orphan? +1
3. was she physicaly abused? +1
mentaly abused? +1
raped? +1
all the other characters know that +1
5. she saw a death of her family member +1
it was har fault +1
she only thinks it was her fault +1
__ out of 10
character
1. She has a very dark or very cheery character +1
2. She has no enemies +1
3. She has no friends +1
4. She has a "big point of view" [ex. "It`s ok that my BF left me, there are so many other boys in the world"] +1
5. She has a best friend that stays that way during all the story +1
6. Everyone who dislikes her ends up humiliated, arrested and/or dead +1
Killed by her +1
Killed by her boyfriend +1
7. She always understands others and gives the answer to any problem of their life +1
8. She shares same characteristics/hobbies with a cannon character +1
__ out of 10
romance
1. Your character seems to have more romance than all the other characters in the story +1
2. her boyfriend is a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character from a cannon couple +1
a character you would like to have as boyfriend +1
it was love from the first sight +1
3. she`s bisexual +1
4. she had sex with a cannon character +1
more than one cannon character +1
a character you would like to have sex with +1
__ out of 10
other
1.she`s a musician +1
a rockstar +1
a dancer +1
a hacker +1
2.she`s better than a cannon character in some specific area he/she`s good at [ex. better in taijutsu than rock lee, smarter than L, etc.] +1
3.she`s not from a country the story is taking place +1
she somehow popped in the fictional world from the real world +1
4.she doesn`t have to pay for her actions/crimes/misitakes +1
5.her enemies are complete opposites of her +1
6. she looks like one of the cannon characters/character from other anime +1
__ out of 10
to the anti-sue traits!
2. remove one point if your character is a smoker
3. she has a desiese that doesn`t heal during the story -1
4. she has overweight -1
5. she`s in love with a character who doesn`t love her back -1
6. she`s weak mentaly or physicaly -1
results~
less than 5 points- the anti-sue
your character is definetly an opposite of mary sue! It`s obvious that you`ve been trying to protect your character from suedom, but a few more good traits wouldn`t hurt.
5-15 points original character
congratulations! You`ve created an interesting, well-balanced original character! ^-^ you sure need a lot of skills to create such a great character, good job!
15-25 points boarding-sue
hmm... i can`t say your character is a mary-sue, but it`s really close to it! You should edit her a little to make her more realistic and interesting!
25-35 points the mary-sue
my oh my, we have a trouble! D: I understand that you tried to create a nice and interesting character that others would like, but you`ve overdone it. Remember, a character has to have flaws! If you don`t want to ruin your fanfiction, try to rework your character.
35< points the ultra-sue
OH MY GOD, NOT THAT! BURN IT! You`ve created a monster, my friend. Take a blank sheet and create another, more realistic character.
