David Blaze
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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss, you'll land among the stars!
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Post by David Blaze on Mar 23, 2009 15:50:33 GMT -5
im in, but not with David Blaze.
Use Jeremiah Sykes, David is already in another one.
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Jeremiah Sykes
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[M:0]
"Honestly, your beginning to bore me. Do something entertaining or go away."
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Post by Jeremiah Sykes on Mar 23, 2009 15:52:16 GMT -5
Heres the reference to the character, if you need it.
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 15:57:21 GMT -5
- Kate McHallin-Rebel
- Allen Daughtry- Rebel
- Ryuu Hikari- Rebel
- Adrian Hanlon -Government
- Sara Quinn- Government
- Fei Long -Government
- Aureus/Levi -Both. That's right, both. XD
- Stu - Rebel
- TJ- Not sure yet.
- SRP -Rebels
- Jeremiah Sykes - Not sure yet
We're out numbered Sara!!!!! D: Which truth be told, changes my plans for the story... but not in a horrid sort of way. I'll be starting on the first chapter shortly. As soon as I fully figure out who I want to be main characters. <3 And of course, how they'll look etc. I might throw out some PMs and stuff for questions, to get details down. <3 Love you all!!!! |
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 16:33:50 GMT -5
So um, as I want some input here real quick... and to show you how it's going to be written.
First four paragraphs!
There were names for places like this. In the old times they called them the red light district, somewhere on the outskirts of the fifth solar system they have some really weird names for this stuff. But then again, they barely speak English as it is. They’re so inbred, whoever the hell you fuck is family, even if you go off planet for your fun. Good thing this isn’t the Fifth, instead it’s an outskirt planet of the entire UPF, on the outside of nowhere. Because a place like Kate’s Pleasure House isn’t found even on the lands of Earth, the place we all come from.
You walk down the street, past the cheap whores selling their wares and the sketchy sort of drug dealers who ‘refine’ their goods with dirty blood and tainted chemicals. None of it is even worth a cent, but if you’re short on cash you don’t really care on quality. You just want the things that get you high, get you away from reality, and the harsh reign of the government. The supposed good guys. Heh, makes me laugh. The place is in the center of the street, fourth house on the left. The door pretty much lets out on the street, without a sidewalk on the front. Considering mankind only got on this planet forty years ago, it isn’t a surprise that they did such shoddy work.
Up the stairs and into the one place on this backwater planet worth living for, Kate’s Pleasure House. High quality stuff here, always the best of the best. You couldn’t pay to get better, and Kate likes to keep it that way. The secrets being screamed behind the walls, you can’t even hear them when you walk inside. The walls are thick on purpose, everyone is safe here. Which is why you can wait in line with the cops, the drug dealers, the pimps, and the government officials without worrying about someone busting you or beating the shit out of you. Once inside those walls, the only law is the word of Kate.
Sometimes everyone gets to see her, and other times you’re lucky to talk to the second. There’s always someone at the desk in the waiting room. It’s better than the doctor’s place, cleaner too. On Yarbos there’s too much blood spilled to keep a hospital clean. The man sitting at the desk? He’s tall and fit like sin. His hair is bleached stark white, like that stuff they call snow. He’s got a pair of sunglasses on, even on the inside because so does everyone else. Everywhere there is breath, everywhere there is life, there are sunglasses. Because you can’t get by in life without them, can’t survive without them. Secrets are best hidden by a good pair of shades.
Behind this man, behind the walls, under the stairs is a place no one but Kate and her team knows about. Like the bat cave, but better. Panels line the walls, dug thirty years ago. Kate’s not even that old, and she didn’t inherit it from her mother. The people who did the work are dead, long in the ground and cold for years. But the bowels of the building hold the truth, hold the deep secret no one can find out without being admitted by Kate or being killed. The United Planet Federation thinks they have Yarbos by the balls, but the truth is the rebels hiding in plain sight are taking back everything. Starting with this one planet. This one place. The crux of all mankind, waiting to be born. Just gotta figure out if mom and dad kill each other first or not.
Note, this is a rough draft. <3
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Post by Patrick O'Connor on Mar 23, 2009 17:33:34 GMT -5
Patrick will be a rebel, for great justice!!!
oh wait i appear to be late, whatevs, looking good so far though
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 17:34:05 GMT -5
Yeah, if that's what you wanna call it. <3 Added. Bwhahahahahahaha. <3
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Travis
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No matter what, you?ll never take that from me. My reign is as far as your eyes can see.
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Post by Travis on Mar 23, 2009 17:49:34 GMT -5
Use Travis if you'd like.. I don't care if he dies.. As long as he at least dies in a cool way.  xD |
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 17:51:47 GMT -5
Sweet. More males. XD <3
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Matrim Gallagher
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THE ORIGINAL MR. CHEEZECAKE[M:58]
Ore wa omo hito!
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Post by Matrim Gallagher on Mar 23, 2009 18:07:57 GMT -5
I'm in
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 18:12:51 GMT -5
- Kate McHallin-Rebel Rebel Leader *
- Allen Daughtry- Rebel *
- Ryuu Hikari- Rebel
- Adrian Hanlon -Government
- Sara Quinn- Government
- Fei Long -Government
- Aureus/Levi -Both. That's right, both. XD
- Stu - Rebel Second in Command of Rebels*
- TJ- Not sure yet.
- SRP -Rebels
- Jeremiah Sykes - Not sure yet
- Patrick - Not sure yet
- Travis -Government
- Matrim - Not sure yet.
Updated <3 *= you've appeared in the story thus far. Purple or green wording means you have a rank, or perma decided spot within the story. XD <3 |
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Travis
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No matter what, you?ll never take that from me. My reign is as far as your eyes can see.
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Post by Travis on Mar 23, 2009 18:13:32 GMT -5
- Kate McHallin-Rebel
- Allen Daughtry- Rebel
- Ryuu Hikari- Rebel
- Adrian Hanlon -Government
- Sara Quinn- Government
- Fei Long -Government
- Aureus/Levi -Both. That's right, both. XD
- Stu - Rebel
- TJ- Not sure yet.
- SRP -Rebels
- Jeremiah Sykes - Not sure yet
We're out numbered Sara!!!!! D: Which truth be told, changes my plans for the story... but not in a horrid sort of way. I'll be starting on the first chapter shortly. As soon as I fully figure out who I want to be main characters. <3 And of course, how they'll look etc. I might throw out some PMs and stuff for questions, to get details down. <3 Love you all!!!! >_>
YOU'RE LACKING SOMEONE!NEVERMIND! |
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 18:22:27 GMT -5
O.o ?
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THE Justin
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Conqueror of 259
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Post by THE Justin on Mar 23, 2009 18:37:00 GMT -5
- Kate McHallin-Rebel Rebel Leader *
- Allen Daughtry- Rebel *
- Ryuu Hikari- Rebel
- Adrian Hanlon -Government
- Sara Quinn- Government
- Fei Long -Government
- Aureus/Levi -Both. That's right, both. XD
- Stu - Rebel Second in Command of Rebels*
- TJ- Not sure yet.
- SRP -Rebels
- Jeremiah Sykes - Not sure yet
- Patrick - Not sure yet
- Travis -Government
- Matrim - Not sure yet.
Updated <3 *= you've appeared in the story thus far. Purple or green wording means you have a rank, or perma decided spot within the story. XD <3 WOO! |
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Kate
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Post by Kate on Mar 23, 2009 18:53:43 GMT -5
And please note, I may make people related, or attracted to the only two girls in the fic thus far... you gets to deal with it XDDDD <3
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THE Justin
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Post by THE Justin on Mar 23, 2009 18:54:34 GMT -5
Attraction is always a good thing >D!
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