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Post by Emi Hitokata on Mar 21, 2009 22:30:18 GMT -5
OK this is the idea I got for the fanfic.
It will be a fantasy type one and the hero will be Adrian. He's the god of some large fountain where girls often bathe. Men are forbidden from entering, and Emi guards the place to castrate any perverts that dare to come in. Buwahahahaha.
One day, Something happens to the piping system, so Adrian is forced out of his fountain. Ummmm I'm still thinking of some more stuff to add in, but yeah...
:3
How is it?
I just copied this out of the spam thread. Yeah, I got bored, so why not? Problem is that I'll need permission to butcher all of your characters(esp Adrian), and I need someone to help me write(Emily and some more people) and someone to read over it once and give advice *cough*Allen and everyone else*cough*
So yeah... What do you think?
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Aureus
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Post by Aureus on Mar 21, 2009 22:35:05 GMT -5
Again, you have my permission to use Aureus/Levi.
As far as the plot goes, maybe you could have a band of characters plot to get into the fountain by distracting Adrian by busting up the piping system, which could be guarded by a giant, blood thirsty panda or some such. It could kinda be an Oceans 11 type thing, with different characters playing different roles in the infiltration of the fountain. Maybe start with the backstory; talk about how it was built, some of the battles Emi engaged in and won by castration, etc. That's all I can come up with for now.
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Ryuu
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Post by Ryuu on Mar 21, 2009 22:35:21 GMT -5
I am in. I give you permission to butcher Ryuu.
If you need help writing, I can help, seeing as English is the subject I excel at.
I better be good in English, it's my first language. >.>
Hmmm, so Adrian is forced out of his fountain, so he gets booted out into the real world. And then he stumbles into a village, and sees a hot spring, and tries to go in, but he goes into the wrong one, the one where only women are allowed, and he gets booted out, but still wants to go back, but he can't, and then meets up with someone?
I don't know, I'm just pulling stuff out of nowhere.
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Post by Emi Hitokata on Mar 21, 2009 22:56:25 GMT -5
I like the Oceans 11 idea. It's a good way to get everyone involved. The group will be made up of sex-deprived boys who bust up the water system to get Adrian out and cause Emi more stress.
Hmmm Ryuu and Aureus will try to seduce Emi just to distract her while the other guys try to get into the fountain or something like that XD
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Ryuu
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Post by Ryuu on Mar 21, 2009 23:03:52 GMT -5
Well Ryuu is certainly sex-deprived, lol.
Ahahaha, yeah, he's gonna dazzle Emi with his looks, lol.
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Post by Allen Daughtry on Mar 21, 2009 23:20:00 GMT -5
Well... normally fanfiction ain't my thing, but since you're writing it Angela, I'll make sure to read it over and help however I can.  |
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Olesya
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Post by Olesya on Mar 22, 2009 0:00:20 GMT -5
You can use Olesya and/or Gwyn if you want XD
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Matrim Gallagher
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Post by Matrim Gallagher on Mar 22, 2009 0:47:52 GMT -5
You can use Matrim, and you should make him delusional, and for some reason he thinks that Emily is in fact his fiancee Reira.....
lol. But I like that oceans eleven idea.
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Travis
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Post by Travis on Mar 22, 2009 1:31:17 GMT -5
GO FOR IT! SOUNDS LIKE IT'LL BE FUNNY  BUTCHER ME ANGELA! |
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Post by Emi Hitokata on Mar 22, 2009 3:30:22 GMT -5
Ok thanks everyone =D
I need a few more people though, so I'll wait a couple of days before I start writing it. In that time, I'll just come up with a few ideas. :3
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Pine
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Post by Pine on Mar 22, 2009 9:04:30 GMT -5
You can use Pine if you want. A person with a split personality and a voice in his head might make for interesting writing.
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Post by seishounohana on Mar 22, 2009 9:32:03 GMT -5
You can use Emily.
Make her eat chocolates for Hyper Emily...
Make her drink alcohol for seductive Emily...
=DDD
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THE Justin
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Post by THE Justin on Mar 22, 2009 13:35:21 GMT -5
Please use Stu |
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Adrian
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...that was a bit disappointing.
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Post by Adrian on Mar 22, 2009 13:40:06 GMT -5
I'm Le Hero!!! Of course, Butcher the bad boy all you like Angela  |
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January
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Post by January on Mar 22, 2009 14:38:54 GMT -5
No offense, but please do not use my character, or his likeness, in your story. I'm looking forward to reading it, though. Good luck  |
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